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Originally Posted by jd10013
you may not like the length of the sentences, but grammatically they're fine. though I suppose I could have used a semicolon in there instead of a colon.
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No harm intended. I am simply pointing out that it's very easy to get carried away. Grammatically it isn't "fine". I see missing or jumbled words. No capitalization right off the bat and a giant run on sentence.
Not meaning to bash at all. Simply saying maybe make sure to check your own before criticizing other posters.