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Old 11-13-2011, 09:37 AM   #2
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Originally Posted by vinman View Post
I blows my mind how some of the members on here can afford these nice cars and can't manage to write a sentence without at least one word spelled wrong, to the point where others have to ask what they meant Maybe hooked on phonics for xmas would help Just drives me nuts sometimes Ok, back to our regularly scheduled program

Lol, your statemant has a whole mess of grammar and spelling errors.

1. In the first line "I" should be "It", I am assuming.
2. There are several punctuation marks missing or used incorrectly.
3. The use of "hooked on phonics" should have been capitalized.
4. Christmas is not abbreviated xmas, in fact it should not be abbreviated at all.
5. Stylistically, there were many words used that were not necessary. For example, there is no need to use the word "on" when saying "the members on here".
6. The sentence "Just drives me nuts sometimes" has no subject noun.

Without looking back, there are probably errors in my response. I will forgive you, if you will overlook my errors as well. It was a good rant, I'll give you that.
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