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Originally Posted by ibeck
Yeah, if it was something that would help me later on I'd be fine with it, but it's a pretty stupid paper. The length is what gets me, I'm trying to squeeze out the most I have out of the same material. We have to use a certain database called EBSCO, and cite all our sources there, no random google results unfortunately. I'm close to being done with the draft though, I've got 5 down so far. I just keep BS'ing the same stuff, but there really isn't more that I can do.
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Adding filler is difficult. You've probably covered everything that you need to say. Thats usually where a rational person would stop.
Is there any background info you can elaborate on for a paragraph? Maybe an example of a woman who fits the description of your topic? Or a counter example, where a kid from a well-off home with his mother & father ended up living a messed up life?
Have you followed the seemingly obvious formula of 'tell us what you're going to say, say it, then tell us what you said'? You have? Did you do it for each 'topic block'? No, well there's another page worth of content for you.