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Overall pretty good. the details are accurate, to the best of my knowledge. One thing to change is to get rid of a bunch of those commas. Also a proof reading tip that I've heard of is to read each paragraph individually, starting with the last one and working up to the first. Odds are a bunch of things won't make sense
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Note, if I've gotten any facts wrong in the above, just ignore any points I made with them
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Originally Posted by FbodFather My sister's dentist's brother's cousin's housekeeper's dog-breeder's nephew sells coffee filters to the company that provides coffee to General Motors......
........and HE WOULD KNOW!!!!
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